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Post by C@V on Oct 26, 2007 8:42:23 GMT -1
To see, her bosom covered o'er With pearls, her body suave, The Adriatic Venus soar On sound's chromatic wave.
The domes that on the water dwell Pursue the melody In clear drawn cadences, and swell Like breasts of love that sigh.
My chains around a pillar cast I land before a fair And rosy-pale facade at last, Upon a marble stair.
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Post by Stan on Oct 26, 2007 8:43:46 GMT -1
To see, her bosom covered o'er With pearls, her body suave, The Adriatic Venus soar On sound's chromatic wave. The domes that on the water dwell Pursue the melody In clear drawn cadences, and swell Like breasts of love that sigh. My chains around a pillar cast I land before a fair And rosy-pale facade at last, Upon a marble stair. Dare I say not your work...? Too much punctuation!
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Post by Argyle_Smurf on Oct 26, 2007 8:44:34 GMT -1
Whoever's it is, its pretty good.
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Post by C@V on Oct 26, 2007 9:05:57 GMT -1
Pretty good!!?? Its beautiful!
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Post by jh1980 on Oct 26, 2007 9:10:00 GMT -1
Who wrote that then?
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Post by C@V on Oct 26, 2007 9:10:46 GMT -1
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Post by jh1980 on Oct 26, 2007 9:15:34 GMT -1
Not bad matey. Rather breast-fixated, but I think we can forgive that! Have an exalt though by way of general appreciation for your literary efforts!
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Post by C@V on Oct 26, 2007 9:17:35 GMT -1
Thank you Julian. I'm glad that you appreciate literature.
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Post by jh1980 on Oct 26, 2007 9:20:28 GMT -1
Thank you Julian. I'm glad that you appreciate literature. Of course... 'tis my milieu...!
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Post by C@V on Oct 26, 2007 9:33:41 GMT -1
Thank you Julian. I'm glad that you appreciate literature. Of course... 'tis my milieu...! And what a soft plush environment it is and yet so very stimulating at the same time. I'd go as far as to state that literature is the king of oxymorons!
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Post by jh1980 on Oct 26, 2007 9:39:59 GMT -1
And what a soft plush environment it is and yet so very stimulating at the same time. I'd go as far as to state that literature is the king of oxymorons! Indeed. Truly tragic, the lack of inspiration from which the youth of today suffer
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Post by C@V on Oct 26, 2007 9:44:48 GMT -1
Meh..........the youth I have brought in to this world will be a lover of literature. I am already reading the classic nursery rhymes to him and short childrens stories by Oscar Wilde.
Isaac will say........loud and proud........J'aime la litterature!!
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Post by jh1980 on Oct 26, 2007 9:48:48 GMT -1
Meh..........the youth I have brought in to this world will be a lover of literature. I am already reading the classic nursery rhymes to him and short childrens stories by Oscar Wilde. Isaac will say........loud and proud........J'aime la litterature!! Bless ya, Daddy Cav! I'm sure he shall reap the benefits, yea even a hundredfold! (Not a giro joke, honest! ) Bringing him up French as well as Jewish then?! Bien sur...
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Post by C@V on Oct 26, 2007 10:02:01 GMT -1
The French (as annoying as they are) have contributed a wealth of wonderful things to this world. Ranging from food to architecture................art to language............fashion to strikes lol! I fully appreciate their affect on this world of ours.
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Post by HURLOCK on Oct 26, 2007 10:03:57 GMT -1
Just not scared to say it how it is Cav, furthermore their stance has been proven right in the long term.
Cultured folk!
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Post by jh1980 on Oct 26, 2007 10:09:22 GMT -1
Three cheers for Les Francaises! ;D
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Post by C@V on Oct 26, 2007 10:09:47 GMT -1
Just not scared to say it how it is Cav, furthermore their stance has been proven right in the long term. Cultured folk! Crap in military scenarios! LOL
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Post by HURLOCK on Oct 26, 2007 10:15:36 GMT -1
Crap in military scenarios! LOL Yeah tell that to Napolean, who had to be exiled! Anyways, much rather be a lover than a fighter
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Post by C@V on Oct 26, 2007 10:16:42 GMT -1
Crap in military scenarios! LOL Yeah tell that to Napolean, who had to be exiled! Anyways, much rather be a lover than a fighter That's what all wimps say! ;D
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Post by Mrs H on Oct 26, 2007 10:17:44 GMT -1
Yeah tell that to Napolean, who had to be exiled! Anyways, much rather be a lover than a fighter That's what all wimps say! ;D So a you a fighter not a lover Cav?
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